Pull the Trigger ~Awarded by Sasha~
Pull the trigger,lay me down in a cheap pine box six foot in the ground You come inside to steal from me What's wrong?Confused by what you see? Fear not my man Death fear I not I'll stand right...
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There's a cold stark despair to this write that really digs deeply into the soul. The repetitive use of "Pull the trigger,lay me down in a cheap pine box six foot in the ground " truly marks the...
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I so agree...you've painted the image and feeling of despair so clearly...deeply moved by your write dear lady!
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A sad song, but a stunning write. This poem reminds me a lot of the songs of Janis Joplin ( '70's ). I wrote a poem about her once. You can't frighten a soul that's already dead C'mere pretty baby let...
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sometimes there is no wish to go on and not enough strength to end the pain....lost inbetween is no place for anyone to be...specially alone...very very well done much enjoyed ...touching
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You can't frighten a soul that's already dead C'mere pretty baby let me play in your head ~ my goodness, Ruthie, you excell in this, dearheart a deeply moving piece of poetry, that is penned in...
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~ Dear Ruthie, it is my great pleasure to Award this profound and powerful piece of poetry. Chilling, haunting and penned with excellence this is truly one of your best, and so very Award worthy...
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